The First STN Practice

So just yesterday, the first STN practice of this school year (and my first practice ever) took place. I was in a group with Lilly, Brooke, and Mari, and we were assigned to make a 30 second commercial that advertised a CKTV hat. We had four hours to do this, two hours of filming, and two hours of editing. I think that it went okay, I mean we definitely could have done better, but yet our commercial wasn't bad (especially for the first STN practice). Basically, our commercial showed a girl who was ignored by others and not cool or popular, but when a CKTV hat suddenly appears to her and she starts wearing it, suddenly everyone notices her and compliments her hat. Then, we advertised the hat by naming some of the great features and giving the special deal of getting a free CKTV shirt if you called to order your hat in the next 5 minutes. A few errors in our video was a spelling error when advertising the hat, and also at one part it didn't make that much sense in what happened. However, I think that our advertisement was okay for the first practice, and now what we know what we have to improve upon, so we can make an even better video at the next STN practice!